Thanks, firecat!

[serene]

oneword



If the wine you drink
makes you stop
look
think
differently

make me wine
make me visible
make me real

I want you to stop
think
look
at me

Wine is sweeter than I am
more complex
more chic
and you love it more
stop
look at me

Comments

wow...

[circumspectly.livejournal.com]

i gotta laugh at mine...and yes, this is the way my tiny little mind works.

wine and chips
don't make much of a snack,
but beer and chips,
now that has a knack.
i like pretzels,
but not without mustard...
it's like having bread pudding
without the custard.

wine by the gallon, is the way to go...
it's better, by far, in a box, though.

Re: wow...

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Hey, it's fun! (And even if it weren't, the point is to get something on the page, so yay you!)

[stonebender.livejournal.com]

I actually got the word wine as well. I can't really type fast enough for a timed exercise like this, but here's my uninspired wordage:

Wine is fine. What a terrible line. I shall go recline and pine.

June 25, 2003 02:46 PM

I'm clearly no poet. *sheesh*

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Everyone gets wine. It's the word of the day. And the goal is to get something on paper, so you did fine. Maybe try fiction next time? *smooch*

[stonebender.livejournal.com]

I figured that out after I posted. So I take it you didn't like my poem? *pout*

[malte.livejournal.com]

Here's what I got down:

dripping from a box
under shoes
over grass
all those people who claim
to be
last drops
from a box I
colour
which?

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmm, yum.

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Silly boy. I just meant that you like fiction more. *smoooooooooooooooooch*

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Wonder if the Dictate would make it easier. Anyway, you did fine. *smooch*

[stonebender.livejournal.com]

Just looking for some attention, love. *smoooooooooooooooooooch*

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

*chuckle* Then you came to the right place! *smile*

*slurrrrp*

[stonebender.livejournal.com]

*nod* it probably would. I just wasn't clear on the concept until suddenly, I was trying to write something.

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

And Lo! a poem was born. ;-)

Love you.

[stonebender.livejournal.com]

"For it did rhyme and was awesome in its wretchedness". :-)

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Oh, hush. One day, I will show you some of my reallllllllly baaaaaaaad poems. They make yours look like something from Robert Frost. In order to get to the good writing, we have to be willing to write tons and tons of CRAP. :-)