Thanks, firecat!

[serene]

oneword



If the wine you drink
makes you stop
look
think
differently

make me wine
make me visible
make me real

I want you to stop
think
look
at me

Wine is sweeter than I am
more complex
more chic
and you love it more
stop
look at me

Comments

[stonebender.livejournal.com]

*nod* it probably would. I just wasn't clear on the concept until suddenly, I was trying to write something.

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

And Lo! a poem was born. ;-)

Love you.

[stonebender.livejournal.com]

"For it did rhyme and was awesome in its wretchedness". :-)

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Oh, hush. One day, I will show you some of my reallllllllly baaaaaaaad poems. They make yours look like something from Robert Frost. In order to get to the good writing, we have to be willing to write tons and tons of CRAP. :-)