oneword

[serene]

Today's oneword.



I detect a thing inside myself
that does not yield to pressure
that does not leave its tiny room
that does not give me pleasure

It sits inside my tiny mind
it keeps my tiny world intact
it doesn't need me telling it
such mundane things as facts

Comments

[bayarts.livejournal.com]

You are SO GOOD at these! Really! I hope you save all of your entries!

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Thanks very much! I find the exercise really fun.

[mmertmom.livejournal.com]

Excellent! Just so you know, the whole poem made it -- regardless of the time limit -- onto the site. that's how i tracked you down.

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad to know that.

[firecat]

Excellent! Reminds me of Ogden Nash.

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Gosh, thanks!