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[serene]

There was a 100-word porn challenge (written quickly, with only minor edits, were the rules) elseweb. This is what I came up with. It's actually the first porn I've ever completed. :-)



When they left the restaurant, it was beginning to be night. Now it was nearly day, and their skin was lit with each other's spent fire. Marina's tongue, Emily's teeth, Marina's fingers, Emily's clit, Marina's palm, Emily's stomach -- it went on that way all night, and now they lay entwined, Marina’s knee pressed tightly between Emily’s thighs, Emily’s sighs, Marina’s utter concentration, Emily’s clenched fists, Marina’s wet admiration, Emily’s yes yes yes.

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[calebbullen.livejournal.com]

Ought to record a reading of that and send it in to podcasting.isfullofcrap.com

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

You may laugh, but I have no idea if I even have the technology to record anything. I mean, I've made voice posts to LJ, but that's it.

[calebbullen.livejournal.com]

You have a microphone? you can make wav recordings with windows if you have a mic and sound card and nothing else.

The podcast has an explicit tag that barely gets used. Although be warned writing 100 word stories can become crazily addictive.

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

No microphone, nope nope (I had to check. Clearly this is not something I've given any prior thought to.) Thanks!

[calebbullen.livejournal.com]

that's a shame. It's a good story. I'd offer to record it but somehow I think that would change the feel entirely.

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I shall see if a microphone is gettable, just for you. (For me, really, but seeming magnanimous is more fun than seeming egotistical.)

[calebbullen.livejournal.com]

well thank you very much for your consideration. hehe!

[lizzibabe.livejournal.com]

Oh,that was a sweet little piece. Thank you for sharing it.

[minimo.livejournal.com]

Gah! That was FABULOUS!

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Gosh, thanks! :-)

[tesseract26.livejournal.com]

*fanning self*

oh, my.

:)

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

:-) Thanks!

[epi-lj.livejournal.com]

That would do well read. However, I quite like it written also.