Wanna see my first real-live business website? (Keep in mind that I did this for my dad for no pay, and it was my practice CSS/PHP site, and I'm not a visual person, and are these enough disclaimers?)
It works on Safari on my Mac. It's nice! My only constructive-criticism-type comments are that I feel that the cloud graphic on the left side is too close to the background colour to create a really solid "grid" feeling to me, so I would probably just darken it up a bit, and that I find the sunshine bullets on the bulleted list on the right side distracting when they go behind the text, especially since they're different sections of the sun from one to the other. Maybe a teeny tiny little cartooney sun as the bullet instead?
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branchandroot
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Date: 2008-12-04 02:34 am (UTC)